Kia Ora, Mia. Good job on your explanation slides for bottle rockets, it was a very interesting plan. My favourite slide was Slide 3 because you have listed some keywords that you have found during your experiment. Next time you might want to list a few more keywords, though they are very interesting. From Tara.
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Kia Ora, Mia.
ReplyDeleteGood job on your explanation slides for bottle rockets, it was a very interesting plan. My favourite slide was Slide 3 because you have listed some keywords that you have found during your experiment. Next time you might want to list a few more keywords, though they are very interesting.
From Tara.